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萌狼日誌
ISSUE #8
Author: 錦鯉萌狼
Published:
Sep 14, 2020
萌狼日誌
Author: 錦鯉萌狼
Published:
Sep 14, 2020
ISSUE #8
【短評】京阿尼旗下KA文庫的《時間》
No Plagiarism!1WzOIRWQW9fFHQT2D784posted on PＥNAＮＡ

該書號稱KA文庫史上最大感動之作。實在不敢恭維，大概是我最近讀過最莫名其妙的輕小說。640Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFD9AdR10SY

內容簡化後大概如下，男主的老婆碰到一種特殊的水變成嬰兒，男主將她養大後，對自己身世之謎毫不知情的她跟住隔壁的毛孩結婚了。那水再次襲來，男主自我犧牲並祝福老婆有一段好姻緣。640Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVWUqhs1qHd

讀完故事簡介，諸君能感受到我滿腔的憤怒嗎？640Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCfX75WP7pq

這本書的問題不只如此，其餘的問題還有篇幅錯配詳略不當、意義不大的科幻設定、心境刻劃並不深刻等等。640Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNHCAHzHBA0

如果京阿尼拿這東西去動畫化怎麼做？首先至少要把老婆嫁給別人的結局改掉啦！以京阿尼的功力，還是有機會魔改得很感人啦！

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