放眼一看，鱗次櫛比，密密麻麻，高低不一的建築物盡在腳下。 女孩的雙手撩緊吊床的上方，雙腿懸垂於半空，感受風的流動。
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好人卡：有意境，但宜可將女孩及建築物作出關連。
嵐靈: 女孩好寫意，但背景沒這寫意的感覺。
阿金：好有意境，再加多一，兩句寫佢望緊乜仲正。
古潮兒：修詞好正
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