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薯仔聯盟！故事描述三十創作挑戰
ISSUE #28
Author: 星羽
薯仔聯盟！故事描述三十創作挑戰
Author: 星羽
ISSUE #28
宇樂 : 128
No Plagiarism!SKmMHhmLuQk50JT0OSGRposted on PＥNAＮＡ

我男朋友係蜘蛛俠。有一日，我問佢愛唔愛我。佢話愛，我話唔信，要佢證明俾我睇。我同佢講話我要整個城市都在我腳下。佢答認我就飛咗上天，之後佢就喺全城最高既兩座大廈之間開咗個位俾我，再拉我上去坐。雖然全城在我腳下，但我男朋友唔記得帶返我落去⋯⋯真係高處不勝寒喇！

宇樂求其作😅 128

古潮兒：好有電影感，嗰句 “佢答認我就飛咗上天” 其實係咪 “佢答完我後就飛咗上天”?

好人卡：我讀落去就諗緊個唔個一陣喺漏咗個女朋友喺上面，點知真喺XD 445Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQB9ro3ZnTO

嵐靈: 其實蜘蛛俠唔愛佢，呢個根本係想飛左佢既局嚟嘅。445Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoENm0GRB3A

愛貓：情節搞笑，有想幻想力，竟然諗到蜘蛛俠（like！！）但可再多描寫一下腳下的風景​​​​​​​445Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcv9h6PgTgK

豆：交其作也可以保留做日後故事情節，尤其搞笑英雄人物故事。^^

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薯仔聯盟！故事描述三十創作挑戰
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Last updated: Nov 16, 2020
Total word count: 34,225
Total reading time: 114 Minutes
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星羽
創作挑戰 作者 故事集 三十題 團隊創作 薯仔聯盟
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