你給我翻譯翻譯 - 英文歌翻譯：Gotta Knock a Little Harder

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這首歌就我個人而言，算是神曲了。634Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBeDkmz1InB
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我很喜歡那種用力氣吶喊演唱的歌，能有這樣的power的爵士樂真的不好找。634Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIMG0GIyQUZ
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不過這首歌雖然是英文，但演唱者跟演奏的樂團卻都是日本人。634Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡalcqu18nhL
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本曲收錄於同樣是泡沫時代神作爵士風格動畫「星際牛仔」電影版「天國之扉」的原聲帶634Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV3BTs9JPIO
「 Cowboy Bebop: Knockin' on Heaven's Door: Future Blues」之中634Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6iGXoiHZ9g

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(電影版標題是knockin' on Heaven's Door，然後片尾曲是Gotta Knock a Little Harder，很可以)

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演唱者是山根麻衣，也是一位唱歌很用力的歌手，星際牛仔的片尾曲「The real folk blues」也是她唱的。634Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3LxNflTGYk
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不過我要推的版本不是原版的，是Platina Jazz的翻唱版：634Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnvZExaKosZ
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演唱者是Douglas Unger，查了一下沒有我有印象的事蹟，不過唱這首感覺真的不錯。

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當然原版山根麻衣唱得也很棒，有興趣的可以去youtube找來聽。

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以下是歌詞翻譯：

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Happiness is just a word to me (#1)

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幸福對我來說只是一個字

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And it might have meant a thing or two If I had known the difference (#2)

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如果我已經知道其差異，那可能曾意味著一件或兩件事。

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Emptiness, a lonely parody And my life,

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我的人生是一場空虛，孤獨的仿諷劇

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another smokin' gun A sign of my indifference(#3)

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另一把冒煙的槍，象徵著我的平凡乏味

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Always keepin' safe inside

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總是照顧好自己的內心

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Where no one ever had a chance To penetrate a break in

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沒人有機會可以直直闖入

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Let me tell you some have tried

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我告訴你某人已試過

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But I would slam the door so tight That they could never get in

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但我會用力地緊緊關上門使得他們永遠無法進來

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Kept my cool under a lock and key (#4)

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在封閉中保持我的冷酷

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And I never shed a tear Another sign of my condition (#5)

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我從不流淚，曝露出我的狀況

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Fear of love or bitter vanity That kept me on the run

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對愛或令人痛苦的虛榮心帶來的恐懼不停驅趕著我

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The main events at my confession (#6)

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去懺悔的主因

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I kept a chain upon my door (#7)

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總是鎖上我的心門

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That would shake the shame of Cain Into a blind submission (#8)

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好擺脫殺人的恥辱將其轉為盲從

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The burning ghost without a name

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燃燒的鬼魂沒有名字

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Was still calling all the same(#9)

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不停地呼喚著

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But I just wouldn't listen

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但我就是不願去聽

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The longer I'd stall

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我拖得越久

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The further I'd crawl

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我爬得更遠

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The further I'd crawl

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我爬得更遠

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The harder I'd fall

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我跌得越痛

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I was crawlin into the fire(#10)

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此時我正爬入火焰之中

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The more that I saw634Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm0Qj83iIDI
The further I'd fall634Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdfE9XqNQJL
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The lower I'd crawl634Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡUNAxlciPjZ
I kept fallin' into the fire

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(跟上段相同就不翻了)

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(間奏)

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Suddenly it occurred to me

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突然間意外降臨到我身上

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The reason for the run and hide Had totaled my existence

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生存已成了我逃跑與躲藏的全部理由

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Everything left on the other side (#11)

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被留在另一面的所有事物

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Could never be much worse than this But could I go the distance (#12)

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再怎麼糟也沒糟到讓我撐不到最後

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I faced the door and all my shame

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我面對那門與所有的恥辱

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Tearin' off each piece of chain

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撕開每一段鎖鏈

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Until they all were broken

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直到他們被破壞

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But no matter how I tried

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但無論我如何嘗試

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The other side was locked so tight The door it wouldn't open

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另一邊依然鎖得如此緊以至於無法打開

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Give it all that I got

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獻上我的所有

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And started to knock Shouted for someone To open the lock

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並開始去踢，為了某人而吶喊，好打開那鎖

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I just gotta break through the door

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我只是要突破這扇門

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Harder that I knocked

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我踢得越用力

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The hotter I got

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得到越多熱情

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The hotter I got

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得到越多熱情

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The harder I knocked

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我踢得更用力

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I just gotta break through the door

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我只是要突破這扇門

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Gotta knock a little harder

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踢得更用力一點

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Gotta knock a little harder

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踢得更用力一點

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Gotta knock a little harder

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踢得更用力一點

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Break through the door

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突破那扇門

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Break through the door

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(Take away)

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(間奏)

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I got ... I ...

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Break through the door

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Break through the door

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Break through the door

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Break through the door

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Break through the door

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I got...I got...I got...I got....I got...

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Gotta knock a little harder

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(本段與原曲不同，應該是即興演出)

(其實我覺得原曲歌詞也是即興地唱)

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翻完覺得太多很詩意的表達了，有很多我自己覺得翻得有點牽強啦。但這首歌做為天國之扉的片尾曲，我覺得韻味很夠，十分貼切主題了。

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備註：

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#1 這句話的意思就是說幸福對我毫無意義，或者可以延伸為沒有體驗過幸福的意思

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#2 在進一步描述前一段，沒有體驗過幸福的感覺

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#3 暗示殺手的人生，一把冒煙的槍暗示著已發射，可能殺過了人

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#4 under a lock and key查了康橋字典的意思有所上，關押的意思，但我覺得翻成封閉更就夠了

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#5 翻得非常牽強的一段，其實原意應該是眼淚是我的狀況的另一個象徵，但這樣直翻太難聽且不通順

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#6 一樣翻得很牽強，原意是對愛與虛榮的恐懼是我在告解時的主要事項，就禱告時主要在懺悔這兩件事這樣

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#7 這邊的door我覺得不只是封閉的心門，甚至是在暗示天堂之扉

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#8 Shame of Cain翻成殺人的恥辱是聖經梗，因為該隱是聖經神話史中第一個殺人犯，也呼應了歌曲中主角的殺手身分

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#9 其實原意不是不停呼喚，是依然依然在呼喚，聽起來太拗口了

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#10 過去進行式，我覺得這是在隱喻走向地獄的意涵就是，所以才想踢開天堂之扉

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#11 暗指門的另一面，而這個門就是天堂之扉

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#12 Go the Distance與其翻成堅持到比賽結束不如就翻成堅持到最後，never be much worse than，這比較級用法應該是no more than的應用變體吧我覺得，所以就翻成再怎麼糟也沒糟到撐不下去。

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參考文獻：

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#4 under lock and key

https://reurl.cc/R4vNan

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#8 Shame of Cain

https://reurl.cc/Njqvan

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#12 Go the distance

https://reurl.cc/pdLlxa

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