寫在眩光劍「佩姬」第二卷完結之後 - 眩光劍「佩姬」- 對岸網友書評

作者妳好840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgPZwhaLHbI
受到妳的邀请840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2QuEWxlo4e
稍微看了下这本佩姬840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGWmF4aEBLl
确实有意思

说说自己对这小说的看法840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOlzKLgch1Y
你写了关于主角前世一堆东西840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnbu5O5dkj8
现世一堆东西840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaDhHrKcCkj
其实就很简单一个道理840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7bfMQTfCeZ
主角想要被爱840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTcSLKLkmnQ
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtQDmfIXAT1
男主卢克爱840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ8iVJxtuNf
主角就爱回去840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7xYXOrdqUF
女主伊莎爱840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnbY5sBd7Ds
主角就爱回去840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO0IeizKJNZ
主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6pzkSMzp0N
想要被爱是佩姬的主题840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5OlnE2LW3m
主角性别不是问题840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr0U6bGDhLZ
内心冲突不是问题840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHSsb87XKUr
主角被爱就迎刃而解840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8abUlkh2ff
看不懂这点整部书就看不了840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡo3OMY2E6o4
妳的书乏人问津是这道理840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcfAUdYgssB
作者妳说主角口是心非840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1jtgKbStTR
欸我说这不对840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDivz9IKdyt
这明摆着口非心也非840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCweJ0A2EQL
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDenQFu5xdp
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKDB0NYh54z
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjMo10leL5h
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwLAu14iuC3
为了被爱840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsZ9Y80E6v0
连原本的性别都不要了840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm9iQMmYIt3
这主角疯的傻的840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjtvV0pLQNF
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题

说说其它角色840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYEdntzEkkr
女主伊莎840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm53tPSQy97
单纯的色鬼840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiP6Wpanz4e
作者您没讲可我猜应有病娇属性840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4fATUl2tDf
黑化可能

艾德兰840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpWIWg2tpFg
可怜虫阿840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9RqrILBMHL
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxreUrIIZU7
妳说解释不够840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRL15QfjDVw
我到觉得清楚840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5z66rmGsvb
这种事常见的阿

男主卢克才是那个写得不够840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4sllnrFq2V
他为啥强840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnwuV53ebKm
妳啥都没讲840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPMBYmhhTAH
这才是问题

主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡR6LEvmhy4q
也是除主角外最明白的角色840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPzIkYzBy3S
她就拿来爱主角的840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqhNylg0GqW
功能性角色

还有其他许多840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgTbPHx8O7J
我就不提了

妳在作品裡回收的台词很多840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdnxU7YXr5j
可以瞧见妳的苦心840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡT4yJsM05vW
我觉得这没必要840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwodmXlARbV
好的台词提一次够了840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZnRPlPhmIS
重提令人厌烦

妳说别的评文说设定不严谨840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyGjUzqzV1z
我倒嫌设定囉嗦840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBRAYjCvoY8
空白很重要840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7yCQo9iuQS
没明白有没明白的好处840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoAxQPe04Ce
而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnr7ocbBDEE
这就够了

谢谢作者妳邀我看这书840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpC0CoAGDzZ
我还会继续看的840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwwOVJuKTLy
确实好看840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwPCkDsKFcc
希望你这能写完840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTPfiV9K58v
能放上起点不840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnGCek4jVMu
这样我也好跟亲友推荐

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作者回應：840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZYb29PQmzy
感謝評文者看到了隱藏在故事中的細節，840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkoXrT6uz7I
有些段落在經您提點之後才發現是這麼一回事，840Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8JjKA7AnD0
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