寫在眩光劍「佩姬」第二卷完結之後 - 眩光劍「佩姬」- 對岸網友書評

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确实有意思

说说自己对这小说的看法838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFSZtxKdJ4p
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现世一堆东西838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡT3zb1Nf84Y
其实就很简单一个道理838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7H6HiDLHZ9
主角想要被爱838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoVGWu5JyEB
佩姬採取行动的理由都是被爱838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzewbLXFdud
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主角对她爸妈也是一样的道理838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ841W6QoVWR
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看不懂这点整部书就看不了838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡilxT9YNIdc
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作者妳说主角口是心非838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡU9q1VEYuuz
欸我说这不对838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡujW1itgkNy
这明摆着口非心也非838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCOO3FUQ9hL
瞧瞧那配角艾德兰838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJD6bqmTI37
主角说不喜欢他还给整个欲擒故纵838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4uJjMtB7GF
给他瞧瞧内裤还奢望他拿来当配菜838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡizhL3anAya
如果不是渴望被爱的人不做这种事的838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9oifbpEPFc
为了被爱838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhV0l2bF8sM
连原本的性别都不要了838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡx5Wl5z9XMY
这主角疯的傻的838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVP29hQuPdE
可瞧她是个妹子所以没啥问题

说说其它角色838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6RtDLEZxlW
女主伊莎838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgJh9ltMObX
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黑化可能

艾德兰838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlltiAfR9XD
可怜虫阿838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJ6J1JzLuin
这角色最可怜的就是想当好人可当不了838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡr7poEqwAJb
妳说解释不够838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNwrni0MoIa
我到觉得清楚838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsCdrZ962Fx
这种事常见的阿

男主卢克才是那个写得不够838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfkMUi1ngo7
他为啥强838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCfTAObvOvv
妳啥都没讲838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwMycjO0JC7
这才是问题

主角老妈是佩姬这故事最好明白838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsnuNvSav15
也是除主角外最明白的角色838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOsoW6HFntJ
她就拿来爱主角的838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9nFxIfI0HA
功能性角色

还有其他许多838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡcHj8jzWfu6
我就不提了

妳在作品裡回收的台词很多838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡoETN2EqKfs
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重提令人厌烦

妳说别的评文说设定不严谨838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSSNEFt95OF
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而且妳作品裡的问题都自洽其说838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhADxoVpycT
这就够了

谢谢作者妳邀我看这书838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqD5LauZFAU
我还会继续看的838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBf3WRGyABM
确实好看838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPsypnaif0P
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能放上起点不838Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVU8dWZ7ihd
这样我也好跟亲友推荐

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