What a lovely story. I loved the twist at the end. Definitely one of my favorite styles of writing, especially when done right. Nowadays, so many writers have so many obvious tells of when a twist is coming. Here, it was done almost to a perfect level! I dont know if i would’ve been able to guess your twist, even if there was more to the story.

Unfortunately, I must with fellow writer Jay Ellis. I believe you opened a little heavily with info that required more background, which kinda made it confusing to start. A couple typos, but I’m not one to talk with mobile “auto-correct”. I do believe this is more mystery than horror, although could also fall in suspense with a little more context, which can just barely be tied to horror if done right. Just my thoughts though. Anyone else want to jump in? Horror isn’t quiet my expertise.

Overall, a fun read. I really didn’t expect most of what you wrote. Keep it up, buddy!

I'm a big fan of this style of writing where you uncover the sequence of events through logs and journals. I would, unfortunately, classify this as more of a mystery-suspense story rather than a  horror story as nothing really creepy happened. Regardless, I loved it! It was really good, and - save for a few typos - fairly well written. I really liked the mystery, although a lot of things were left unanswered. However, the last sentence was a great way to end it because it gives a clue as to why Braith was MIA. Fantastic read. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. :)