This is really weird. A lot of the language choices are very odd. Its warm tangy drops rushed over me being used to describe taking a shower is just absurd. And I'm sorry but I barely made it halfway through the first part. The broken English and weird descriptions were giving me a headache. Stuff just happens. There's no build up. This is about Greek Gods yet the main characters dad is making waffles? Ok? Ill try and read more later to give a follow up.
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