Since it's a lot of chapters, I'm just going to simplify the gist of what I want to say. You are amazing at really creating a world with depth. You have characters that are creative but relate to people, either their dreams or their personality and emotions. The way the world is developed is very unique. Well done.
@Jonathan Jas, well it's just the truth! You have a very unique way of writing that I quite enjoy. I put a lot of work into story worlds as well, so I appreciate that other writers do the same!