我覺得我看了一段很精采的動作片，祕密的暗殺、室內的爆炸、殺手組織處理沒用的廢子，每一幕我看了都覺得過癮阿。
不過我想問的是K跟交響J是同一個人嗎？
變成男人我覺得還蠻意外的，因為現實的交響J是女的，看到變成男人我也噗哧了一下。
還有第一段的那些對話，我覺得可以在後面標註一下說話的對象語氣跟動作，會讓人物更立體一點，更有想像的畫面，讓人感覺身歷其境。
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